A. M. Green

Thanks! This helps a lot :) I think I'll go with this prologue instead of the other one. AMGreen

Thanks. I am posting up more chapters now. AMGreen

Thank you guys! I really appreciate all you're help and suggestions. I am posting the next chapters that I have done right now, so please read! Thanks again. AMGreen

Thanks, I really appreciate that. I totally agree with you on description and stuff like that. My main goal right now is to get the story down, then edit it ...

Thanks Cheezit! I really appreciate it. I've done a couple of short stories, but this is my first attempt at a novel. I'll be posting more soon! AMGreen